I loved every one of your books. This one though felt like chewing broken glass. Spoilerwarning: Hero Rides to the front with an amazing chance to steal enemy supplys and disrupt their plans, then runs away. Hero Builds Fort finds out who told king about him being half demon. Looses fort and deamons apper without warning and make him King of Deamons. Parts were well written, as always but they lacked connection. Especially Deamons coming over and Making him King. I will continue to read the series but this book was a disapointment. Other then that, you are a great writer, perhaps you should take an extra week to publish so you have more time to avoid another book like this one.
I love your books(the broken maye series as well), I wish they were longer like so many others but its great there is a new one so often. I hope there is more to the next book then ash using the demon army to save his wife, I love this story's progression.
I love these books. please keep them coming fast. lol. some typos but i don't mind them as the story is great. since I love playing games, I really enjoy it when he gained more abilities and loots. If there's something i don't particularly like, it's how all those woman throwing themselves at him and his attitude about it. Emelia, yuki and shina are great, but i don't like Allice (>.<). Anyway, keep up the good work and hopefully the next book will come out soon
the reason for the price is amazon's paying system. if it is under 2.99 i only get 35% of the sale price. if it is over 2.99 i get 70%. If it stayed at 70% no matter the price i would have put them as 1.50. I am working hard to have the next book out on the 15th but i might have to push it back to the 1st.
Three books are seriously misspelled, have bad grammar, and serious sentence structure issues. I'm reading Reborn 1-5 on kindle, and I'm spending more time trying to figure out what the text is supposed to say than getting into the plot. Whoever edits these needs to do it again. All of the reviews are full of this; if you want to have people keep buying this book, it needs to be addressed ASAP. I read several hundred pages in an hour, but if all I'm doing is correcting mistakes, I'm not reading, I'm editing, and it's no longer enjoyable, which means I stop reading it and move on to my next book or author.
Thanks for the latest addition to this series, i am eating this story up.
Suprising that ash now has more wives, and has not even informed his first wife that he is still alive especially with the sage having spies in all of the human lands...
I know you have just finished this one however when do you anticipate the next couple to be released?
Thanks for the latest addition to this series, i am eating this story up.
Suprising that ash now has more wives, and has not even informed his first wife that he is still alive especially with the sage having spies in all of the human lands...
I know you have just finished this one however when do you anticipate the next couple to be released?
The book's title is misspelled on Amazon. Says "Hertiage" instead of "Heritage"
ReplyDeletecrud.... thats what i get for tying after midnight. my fingers got a bit befuddled it seems. i will fix it post haste
ReplyDeleteI loved every one of your books. This one though felt like chewing broken glass.
ReplyDeleteSpoilerwarning:
Hero Rides to the front with an amazing chance to steal enemy supplys and disrupt their plans, then runs away. Hero Builds Fort finds out who told king about him being half demon. Looses fort and deamons apper without warning and make him King of Deamons. Parts were well written, as always but they lacked connection. Especially Deamons coming over and Making him King. I will continue to read the series but this book was a disapointment. Other then that, you are a great writer, perhaps you should take an extra week to publish so you have more time to avoid another book like this one.
Anouther great installment in the series. I can't wait for the next one :)
ReplyDeleteI love your books(the broken maye series as well), I wish they were longer like so many others but its great there is a new one so often. I hope there is more to the next book then ash using the demon army to save his wife, I love this story's progression.
ReplyDeleteBest novella yet in this series. Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteWow these books come out fast!
ReplyDeleteI love these books. please keep them coming fast. lol. some typos but i don't mind them as the story is great. since I love playing games, I really enjoy it when he gained more abilities and loots. If there's something i don't particularly like, it's how all those woman throwing themselves at him and his attitude about it. Emelia, yuki and shina are great, but i don't like Allice (>.<). Anyway, keep up the good work and hopefully the next book will come out soon
ReplyDeleteAwsome series...but why is the price so high for such short books? And then you can but books 1-5 in the series for a portion of the price...
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the next book in this series though when is its release?
the reason for the price is amazon's paying system. if it is under 2.99 i only get 35% of the sale price. if it is over 2.99 i get 70%. If it stayed at 70% no matter the price i would have put them as 1.50. I am working hard to have the next book out on the 15th but i might have to push it back to the 1st.
DeleteFair enough then...bring on the rest of the series
DeleteFair enough then...bring on the rest of the series
DeleteThree books are seriously misspelled, have bad grammar, and serious sentence structure issues. I'm reading Reborn 1-5 on kindle, and I'm spending more time trying to figure out what the text is supposed to say than getting into the plot. Whoever edits these needs to do it again. All of the reviews are full of this; if you want to have people keep buying this book, it needs to be addressed ASAP. I read several hundred pages in an hour, but if all I'm doing is correcting mistakes, I'm not reading, I'm editing, and it's no longer enjoyable, which means I stop reading it and move on to my next book or author.
ReplyDeleteHe obviously has no editor.
ReplyDeleteI was being diplomatic.
DeleteJust wondering as today bieng the 2nd of November if the latest reborn is bieng released as per your ccomment of the eta of 1st november
ReplyDeleteThanks for the latest addition to this series, i am eating this story up.
ReplyDeleteSuprising that ash now has more wives, and has not even informed his first wife that he is still alive especially with the sage having spies in all of the human lands...
I know you have just finished this one however when do you anticipate the next couple to be released?
Also hope your feeling better now :)
Thanks for the latest addition to this series, i am eating this story up.
ReplyDeleteSuprising that ash now has more wives, and has not even informed his first wife that he is still alive especially with the sage having spies in all of the human lands...
I know you have just finished this one however when do you anticipate the next couple to be released?
Also hope your feeling better now :)